Success Criteria
Write 8-10 sentences using Wow words and similes.
1 sentence has alliteration in it.
Hook your reader in. (Make your first sentence interesting/ different)
OMG! Disgusting! What has Mrs McG got us into AGAIN!!! Mrs McG gave us a big blob of this random ooze and what did I think straight away “Yuck” I thought I wasn't going to touch it but ended up touching the liquid.
OMG! The first thing I see Is a blob that looks like a squished pancake. All of a sudden it slowly very slowly started to turn into a big marble floating like a great big marble pool. I slowly put my pinky finger in the gooey substance, I put more and more of my hand in it until my whole hand was in.It was so COOL! in the end? I thought I am going to mush it around. WHAT! randomly I see it turning into liquid? It smelt like hand sanitizer and paint gross. Just wondering did this come out of Mrs McG nose?
All of a sudden I hear the squishiness coming together as I continue playing with it I start hearing “eeeewwww” “Yuck” and “I ain’t touching that” It was funny.
The End was me feeling snotty, my tummy sink, and me having squashed snot in my hands.
WOW that was breathtaking. your story was on point because you used describing words, adjectives punctuation. great work keep up with the awesome blog posts!
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