Hey Erica, I like you picture its really effective. How do you do it. Maybe next time you could do a video instead. Like how to do it or something. Have you thought of making the blurb bigger and maybe a little hook with it like STRETCH PULL and GOT IT. Right now its was kinda hard for me to read it because it has no excitement it. From Dylan If you would like to visit my blog here it is
Hi Erika my name is Antonette I am a year 6 student from St.Bernadette's Primary School. I really like the way you put in a photo of you doing an action from the Olympics. Maybe next time you could tell us what part of the Olympics they do this action. I am excited seeing more from you Erika.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Great photo Erika.
ReplyDeleteHey Erica, I like you picture its really effective. How do you do it. Maybe next time you could do a video instead. Like how to do it or something. Have you thought of making the blurb bigger and maybe a
ReplyDeletelittle hook with it like STRETCH PULL and GOT IT. Right now its was kinda hard for me to read it because it has no excitement it.
From Dylan
If you would like to visit my blog here it is
Hi Erika my name is Antonette I am a year 6 student from St.Bernadette's Primary School. I really like the way you put in a photo of you doing an action from the Olympics. Maybe next time you could tell us what part of the Olympics they do this action. I am excited seeing more from you Erika.
ReplyDelete