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Thursday 11 August 2016

Be The Inspiration

I like how…                                     
That we can be the inspiration for 2016.
That gods are looking over us.
The flag is an Inspiration.
The describing was good.
And how it says we stand as strong as the mountains.




 I don't like how…
The Heavens are lines they could make them stars i the sky.
Maybe they could do everything in the scene of the Rio Olympics.
Maybe they could show the Olympic people playing and more geared up.

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