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Attempt 5
Attempt 5:
I couldn't wait to find out about the taste. We were about to taste chocolate and I was excited about that since It would be Interesting to visibly find out the textures In It. I feeled a hard squared shape of chocolate with a muchness feel while It was staring at me with Its square shaped eye. I could taste the cocoa covered on the outside. As i bite into it there would be the delight of it . I could taste all the different textures It was prodigious.
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