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Friday 1 September 2017

Complex Sentences

This week we have been learning how to write complex sentences and paragraphs useing complex sentences and simple sentences. Here are some of my sentences.

  • The girl was getting by a big stamped of ants while she thought that they were trying to turn her into ant women.

  • As the ants stumbled onto her she felt shivers down her spin like little pricks going down her bumpy spine while she trys to pull herself away with the bumpy rackety stick.

  • The ants were building a ginormous hill with her in it and she felt if though she had stumbled the wrong way.

  • The ants were making her into something as though she couldn't see.

  • The humongous giant exterminator like figures were sucking people up with ginormous vacuums as if they were going to store them in jars and then… Eat them for breakfast. It was like they were useing them for a play house be cause under those mask you never know who they are they could be children. But they're not taking the houses or castles around them! So I wonder what they want with them. It might be bad and you may get a shock.


  • Colors:
  • Blue- full stops and capitals letters.
  • Green- Verbs
  • Yellow- conjunction

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