I remember smelling… the burning dark fire that was in the air
I remember tasting… that rich chocolate Ice Cream melting in my mouth
I remember seeing… those bright blue bubble waves rising to the shore
That was summer
I remember feeling… the soft sand in between my toes at the blue beach
I remember hearing.. the birds chirping right outside my window when I woke up
That was summer.
By Erika
Hi Erika,
ReplyDeleteI love how you have said things that happened to you in the summer.
I liked how you used amazing "WOW" words.
Maybe next time don't say the word blue as much and remember that you put full stops and make sure it makes sense.
By Brianna